REVISIONS REQUESTED Thank you for your interest in a Gentle Night. After reading your application, the mod team feels some revisions are needed.
► The mods would like to see details on how the Green Jewel will increase Davina’s powers.
► Clarify which sub-skills of magic Davina does and doesn’t have. By linking to the whole witchcraft page, the mods are left with the impression that she has access to all these powers. If that is true, that’s fine, but please detail those in your app in their entirety.
► Regarding Channeling: this isn’t a revision as much as a head’s up. If Davina channels power from the land in Terreille, that power will sicken her. The draw of power will also wither the land beneath her feet even more than it already is.
► Regarding Dark Magic: we’re letting anyone with resurrection magic know that it will not work in Terreille. Davina is welcome to try, but it will not work.
You have three days to complete and submit your revisions by responding to this comment.
REVISIONS REQUESTED
Thank you for your interest in a Gentle Night. After reading your application, the mod team feels some revisions are needed.
► The mods would like to see details on how the Green Jewel will increase Davina’s powers.
► Clarify which sub-skills of magic Davina does and doesn’t have. By linking to the whole witchcraft page, the mods are left with the impression that she has access to all these powers. If that is true, that’s fine, but please detail those in your app in their entirety.
► Regarding Channeling: this isn’t a revision as much as a head’s up. If Davina channels power from the land in Terreille, that power will sicken her. The draw of power will also wither the land beneath her feet even more than it already is.
► Regarding Dark Magic: we’re letting anyone with resurrection magic know that it will not work in Terreille. Davina is welcome to try, but it will not work.
You have three days to complete and submit your revisions by responding to this comment.